MobileRead Forums - View Single Post

ApK · 12-29-2011, 01:17 PM

Good luck with this, James.

It sounds interesting, and I went to take a look.

With all the grammar errors on the first page of your novella's introduction, I'm not too motivated to wade through the whole sample, much less pay $7 for the rest of it.

Consider finding an editor, and offering it at MUCH lower price.

Perhaps you can find someone from the English dept there at MSU to assist.

There are also some great resources for both editorial and marketing advice here among the forum membership. Check out the Writer's Corner section.

ApK

p.s. Would I be guessing correctly that English is not your first language?

12-29-2011, 01:17 PM	#2
ApK Award-Winning Participant Posts: 7,316 Karma: 67862884 Join Date: Feb 2010 Location: NJ, USA Device: Kindle	Good luck with this, James. It sounds interesting, and I went to take a look. With all the grammar errors on the first page of your novella's introduction, I'm not too motivated to wade through the whole sample, much less pay $7 for the rest of it. Consider finding an editor, and offering it at MUCH lower price. Perhaps you can find someone from the English dept there at MSU to assist. There are also some great resources for both editorial and marketing advice here among the forum membership. Check out the Writer's Corner section. ApK p.s. Would I be guessing correctly that English is not your first language? Last edited by ApK; 12-29-2011 at 01:23 PM. Reason: Added P.S.