Thread: MobileRead Short Story Anthology - [DISCUSSION & REVIEW]
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Old 03-08-2014, 04:57 AM   #32
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When My Father Died
Version 1-3 is up now. Hope it is a little better, albeit longer.

Removed the quotes around 'died' so as to make it less predictable.
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