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Thanks! Read it this afternoon. Found just a few minor errors:
She ate breakfast In the coffee shop
Especially in that posilion.
"Necio!" he screamed. "Fuera!" <Fuera isn't italicized>
And here's why I love Raymond Chandler:
"On the dance floor half a dozen couples were throwing themselves around with the wreckless abandon of a night watchman with arthritis."
Man, do I wish I'd written that!
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