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Originally Posted by VydorScope
Just enough that they get the picture and are not thinking of a walking path because later 20-30 soldiers are going to be on the trail and our hero is going to be face with a fight on that trail. None of that works if a person thinks he is following a game trail or something like that.
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I think Harry's right. Try using words that suggest the width rather than a measurement. "I ran across a track a small wagon could traverse easily."