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Originally Posted by frostschutz
If it's like Groundhog Day, all the more reason to read it. But it's not actually like Groundhog Day, if it's not the same day there's no way the main character can tune it to be a perfect day by trial-and-error.
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Hi frosty,
Many thanks for the feedback.
I guess its difficult to explain the story without giving it away and ruining it for the reader. Ewan isn't living the same day over again and has no opportunity to improve it. He does go through a range of emotions during his experiences but there are also a number of sub plots in addition to the mysterious fact that he dies every day.
I agree that my website is far from fantastic at this stage and will continue on trying to improve it.
I also like the idea of putting some sample chapters on the site and maybe trying to get it onto Smashwords.
I'm also thinking of giving the first part away on Thursday using the 1 day Amazon promo feature.
I want people to read and experience the Dead Loop becasue the 5 random unkown joe public test readers I used during its creation loved it!