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Old 01-17-2018, 02:07 PM   #63
Gregg Bell
Gregg Bell
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I think I have the blurb figured out. Many are worried that after seeing a playful cover (but many writers like me have playful covers but I digress) and an insufficiently preparatory blurb that the reader will faint when they read that violent first scene. So, this is the new blurb and it will prepare them for the violence. Here it is.


Some say she’s a sociopath. Some say she hates men. Some say she just loves animals.

Lainey Tripper is a whiskey-drinking hard-living animal rescue feminist. But she has just this one little problem: she can’t seem to stop killing men.

Lainey’s the head of the IWS, a radical feminist animal rescue group dedicated to stopping the villainous Donovan from oppressing women and animals. But now Donovan has taken his evil to a new level—he’s systematically stealing Chicago’s dogs. In Lainey’s enthusiasm to stop Donovan, she again kills a lot of men. Her fellow IWS members plead with her to moderate her man-killing tendencies, but Lainey feels the men deserve it, and besides, she must do whatever it takes to save Chicago’s dogs.

Will Lainey stop Donovan in time? And when she’s done, will any men be left alive?
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