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These guys are both in the last year or so of high school, living in the 'normal world,' and have just both been exposed to the fact that the world is very different than they ever imagined. The mentor is someone like them who has had one of their positions before, and can show them the basics, explain things, etc.
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I want to introduce the mentor as someone unknown but need a way to do it that doesn't seem too formulaic or convenient, but also position him so they can trust him rather quickly.
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Were the boys on a sports team at school? Maybe the mentor could be a high school boy that graduated a few years before them? Or if he was known to them, the mentor could be their coach?
Writing has so many problems to solve than just writing it..
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