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@caleb72 Beowulf
Well told story with great word imagery. You can almost feel the beast's breath upon your neck.
I really like the structure of your poem and your rhyming pattern is very nice.
This is really an excellent piece!
@crich70 Cupid
Your couplets work beautifully in this poem. I absolutely LOVE the story you've told. Excellent word imagery -- great humor -- wonderful flow.
Thank you for sharing thgis excellent poem.
Regards,
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