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Old 07-29-2010, 09:18 AM   #2
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Thanks! Read it this afternoon. Found just a few minor errors:

She ate breakfast In the coffee shop
Especially in that posilion.
"Necio!" he screamed. "Fuera!" <Fuera isn't italicized>

And here's why I love Raymond Chandler:

"On the dance floor half a dozen couples were throwing themselves around with the wreckless abandon of a night watchman with arthritis."

Man, do I wish I'd written that!
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