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Is there an issue w/ changing a title?
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01-09-2013, 04:24 PM
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FWIW: I think the current title reads better. Better rhythm.
Also, I think the "your" is important, and will help it speak to the appropriate audience, unless you are actually trying to teach people how to get OTHER PEOPLE'S kids to move out.
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