Originally Posted by frahse
I can't see into VydorScope's spoiler box in #1 probably because of my browser, so I will work with the other contributions and Vydor's later statement in #4
First it was interesting to see the difference between
Vydor's writing and EileenG's. Nancy had too little to form an opinion on.
Second, one thing in particular about #4 bothered me.
Lose the "suddenly."
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