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kennyc · 12-07-2012, 07:18 AM

Thanks for sharing what you've written, it looks good to me, you are writing well and it reads well. As long as you know where it's going and you maintain the narrative drive, you'll get there.

12-07-2012, 07:18 AM	#12
kennyc The Dank Side of the Moon Posts: 35,872 Karma: 118716293 Join Date: Sep 2009 Location: Denver, CO Device: Kindle2; Kindle Fire	Thanks for sharing what you've written, it looks good to me, you are writing well and it reads well. As long as you know where it's going and you maintain the narrative drive, you'll get there.