View Single Post
Old 09-03-2014, 01:39 AM   #11
xibalban
Connoisseur
xibalban knows the way to San Jose.xibalban knows the way to San Jose.xibalban knows the way to San Jose.xibalban knows the way to San Jose.xibalban knows the way to San Jose.xibalban knows the way to San Jose.xibalban knows the way to San Jose.xibalban knows the way to San Jose.xibalban knows the way to San Jose.xibalban knows the way to San Jose.xibalban knows the way to San Jose.
 
xibalban's Avatar
 
Posts: 77
Karma: 54562
Join Date: Aug 2014
Location: Gangtok (Sikkim), India
Device: Kobo Aura HD
Smile

Quote:
Originally Posted by hildea View Post
Commenting as a reader, not a writer: I'm not sure I understand it. Admittedly, English isn't my first language, but I read it quite a lot, and don't usually have problems figuring out what's going on. As far as I can tell, your poem goes something like this:

Narrator: Here's an imp who's going to abduct someone.
Imp: Hey, sage, I want to dump a lady and need courage.
Sage: Women are bad.
Imp: Some women are good.
Sage: No, seriously, women are really bad.
Imp: OK, you've convinced me.

This confuses me, mostly because dumping someone is pretty much the opposite of abducting them.
Correct interpretation. I meant no offense to womenfolk, by the way.
Well dump also means "to knock down" and thats what I meant. It is always safe to knock someone down before abducting .
xibalban is offline   Reply With Quote