Quote:
Originally Posted by Steven Lake
Tell: Johnny was an egotist.
Show: "I'm the greatest thing since god, and I am the most incredible as well, and nobody is greater than I am, so kneel before me, slave!"
It's probably not the best example, but it gets the point across.  Either way, of all the issues that writers struggle with, this is probably the biggest. |
What would you say to ...
Jane really hated Jonny's egotistical nature...
or
"You not freaking God, no matter what you think! You <censor blah blah blah>!" yelled Jane.
Are those telling? I would guess the first is, second is not, but I think both are better then Steven's first example.