Thread: Young Adult Alcott, Louisa May: Little Women (Illustrated) V2.0 September 2010
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Old 09-26-2010, 03:50 AM   #2
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This is my first ePUB book so I’m very interested in feedback. Thanks!
It looks very good on a quick look. The only thing I noticed immediately is that the first paragraph in each chapter still has a first line text indent. It's common for the first paragraph in each chapter to have no first line text indent, as there's no ambiguity about it being the start of a paragraph.
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