Thanks for the up!
For those grabbing this, the only problem I see so far is that there are quite a few places mid-chapter where the author jumps to a different scene. In this mobi version there's no break in the text (a few extra spaces?) to indicate a new scene. Not a deal-breaker but kind of jarring. I find myself rereading bits just to figure out where the break was.
I'd be curious to see what a printed copy looks like.
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