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Old 12-20-2017, 02:27 PM   #12
Dazrin
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I am about 2/3 through it, so far...well, if it wasn't for this discussion I wouldn't bother finishing.

There are some funny scenes but overall it is very disjointed.

After his challenge in the intro asking if we could figure out which sentences he added here and there after the fact to join things together I was hoping for more. As-is, I can't join things together with them, let alone without them.
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