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frahse · 08-23-2012, 03:04 PM

I can't see into VydorScope's spoiler box in #1 probably because of my browser, so I will work with the other contributions and Vydor's later statement in #4

First it was interesting to see the difference between
Vydor's writing and EileenG's. Nancy had too little to form an opinion on.

Second, one thing in particular about #4 bothered me.

Lose the "suddenly."

08-23-2012, 03:04 PM	#6
frahse occasional author Posts: 2,314 Karma: 2064403292 Join Date: Sep 2011 Location: Wandering God's glorious hills, valleys and plains. Device: A Franklin BI (before Internet) was the first. I still have it.	I can't see into VydorScope's spoiler box in #1 probably because of my browser, so I will work with the other contributions and Vydor's later statement in #4 First it was interesting to see the difference between Vydor's writing and EileenG's. Nancy had too little to form an opinion on. Second, one thing in particular about #4 bothered me. Lose the "suddenly."