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Old 07-22-2017, 11:17 AM   #3
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As I've progressed in my path as a writer, I've learned many things. Most importantly, the quality of my writing has improved.

Alien Coffee is another of the books I've gone through and made vast improvements in readability while losing none of the story. I've redone the cover as well. All links in the first post of this thread now have the new cleaner version.

It's 1/2 off on Smashwords through the end of July.

All my best.
This just lost me as a reader.
The reason is because you now have two different books with the same title. If I had read the original and someone else read the new version, we couldn't discuss it because things have changed.
Most readers if they read the first version are probably not going to read the updated book.
Of course, if it was bad enough that it really did need revised then people probably won't buy your next book either.
First impressions on books are lasting.

Not you, but I have seen many books that the author just needed to take it down and start all over.
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