Perhaps improper to ask but could you please give it another read? I think I changed some of these you mentioned (same old version, lol). Let me know that if it is now a 'passable' story for the anthology (assuming I don't make the other changes).
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Originally Posted by Graham
Hi Marlowe,
Here are my comments on v1.4. I really like the added background details.
I hope all that helps. Again, these are, of course, just my impressions as I'm reading - so take as much or as little as makes sense to you.
Graham
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