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Originally Posted by TGS
Can I offer a bit of free unasked for proofreading? Is there an article missing from, "...just a small moment in day that was slow..."?
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Sure, you can offer....
But it's staying how it is. I like the cadence of the sentence and how it sounds inside my head. Whether it is a hundred percent grammatically correct, well, that's up for debate, and also plenty of discussion (but not here).
Any typos though, I'd be glad to hear about.
Oh, and please don't take this as offence, I just firmly believe that any adherence to pure grammar detracts from individuality in the written word. It is not a slur on you or meant to put under question your observation (which is true, by the way).
