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Old 06-26-2010, 01:04 PM   #224
Sam Landstrom
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Originally Posted by steph_g View Post
Just finished Metagame. Overall, I liked it a lot. I enjoyed the world that was portrayed in the book. I have to say it needs some editing - not so much in the storyline but in the spelling. There are numerous uses of the wrong homophones which got to be distracting after a while. However, the price was right, so I can't complain too much. I guess it's because I'm a teacher and a stickler for that stuff! I would have liked more background information about how the world evolved into that form. As I said, though, I did enjoy it and would love to see a sequel.
Thanks for the read and the feedback! The book got picked up by Amazon.com's newly created publishing division, AmazonEncore, and they're editing the crap out of it, LOL. Two seperate editors are hitting it, both for copy edits and for more in-depth feedback. When it gets re-released, it will be sparkly clean and even have some cool story tweaks.

You can pre-order the next version here: http://www.amazon.com/MetaGame-Sam-L...dp/1935597167/
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