Thank you all for your help.
The majority opinion (some conveyed to me privately) seems to be that, while some of you liked it (in some cases, a lot), Lethe is not fit for public consumption, so I'm suspending its release indefinitely. I'll let it stew over the summer and revisit it with a clear head. I'll leave it accessible on Smashwords for a few days longer in case someone late to the fray wants to sample it.
Thanks to everyone who helped with the copy / continuity editing.
On the good news front, I just received a multiple entry visa for Ghana today.
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