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Originally Posted by daveconifer

Here's what a few people are saying about Snodgrass Vacation, a politically incorrect spoof on a Disney Vacation!

Thanks to your previous free offer I d/l and read this - and it is quite amusing, great light read.

Without appearing too negative, may I ask if you are self-editing? If so, you might want to consider getting a second set of eyes on the final output. There were some typo/word choices that made me (Amateur Mister Language Person) wince. Still a good read, nothing that really detracted from the story, but polishing touches that might help move you up the next rung.

Thanks again!
Richard