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Old 06-04-2010, 02:17 PM   #30
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Originally Posted by JamesMonaghan View Post
Hi,

My name is James, first time poster. I have started looking into indie writing recently for some of my own projects, and decided to take a look around here. When I saw your request, I thought I'd introduce myself and let you know that I have downloaded Lethe in order to help out, if that is okay? I've read the first chapter so far, some great writing, mixed with some less great writing, but the end of the chapter hooked me.

Anyway, I'll let you know what I think and what I pick up.

Thanks for the opportunity!

James
Thanks for picking up Lethe, James. Yeah, I just looked at that first chapter again with a fresh eye and there are some really crappy phrases. Expect a new version to show up on Smashwords shortly.

I would be glad to hear any critique you can offer. Lethe is a bit of an experiment for me, so I went places stylistically that I would not normally go, with mixed results.
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