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Old 05-23-2010, 06:52 AM   #642
kennyc
The Dank Side of the Moon
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Originally Posted by GeoffC View Post
Winter Thief


thought - provoking.

one wonders, who she is ?

Yes, one does.

BTW I change one word....."pierced eyes" is a bad cliche that slipped in...


Here's the revision:


Winter Thief


That night she stole the moon
and hid it beneath her skirts.
As she looked up her eyes took mine.
She flashed that seductive smile
and vanished into the cold dark wind.


Kenny A. Chaffin – 2/10/06
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