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Old 05-20-2010, 03:30 AM   #619
GeoffC
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Originally Posted by badgoodDeb View Post
The 3 verse poem (the earlier one) brings to my mind thoughts of glacier(s).
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Originally Posted by WT Sharpe View Post
I can see that.
And now I am able to give it its name ...

The Glacier

But as with all my chitterings, it's whatever you want it to mean ....

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Originally Posted by kennyc View Post
For me at least, the title is often the most crucial part of a poem.
As I seem to have shown by this example ....

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Originally Posted by beppe View Post
Ah the artist eye. Chapeu.

It makes sense. It gives it sense. When I read it withou knowing anything I set it in a courtyard. Of course I am not a poet.
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