GeoffC
I'm still trying to figure out the first one, but this last one is interesting in how it can be read either down or across.
After reading it both ways a few times, I think I like it best when read across the page.
As to the first one... I keep changing what it means to me. The first time through I visualized the sun and moon, but the last part didn't fit. Then I added in the Earth and breaking free of current orbit, moving through the fabric of space, and being caught in orbit around another thus becoming a "moon"..
(Whoa, too much History Channel, for me.
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GeoffC I
to you, for although I like the feel of the second, your first has caused me to linger searching for meaning.