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The image in the first stanza is quite catching, well lighted I woud say. with the last verse setting up what maybe is a riddle. Very nice. Silvery.
The second stanza has catching changes of focus, pace and tone. Before was flight now it snakes. Misterious.
The third sets in duration (in time) and the resounding no are like the bells of destiny: you will end. The last verse no longer slow surprises and unsettles poor me.
Intriguing stuff. Classy
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