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Old 05-18-2010, 06:12 PM   #4
PKFFW
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Gave up after about 50 pages.

I think the story is actually quite good and the author has the makings of a good writer but the book just isn't finished in my opinion. It needs a good editing and proof reading to really make it readable. The lack of this just grated on me too much and that's why I couldn't finish it.

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