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Old 05-17-2010, 11:09 AM   #9
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I'm down to 96.5K now (from 185K) and that's after adding some new stuff. I still have some chaff to reap and then my book will start growing again. But not too much more, I'm at the climax of the story right now, all that's left is resolution.

My goal is to have this ready for Beta Readers by the end of June (or July 15, at the latest, before I go to Ethiopia.)

Any Beta readers interested perusing a fantasy about the afterlife for copy/consistency errors?

I have to warn folks that the story's pretty weird. You won't recognize much from other authors' depiction of the afterlife, except maybe for Dante and the Purgatorio.

It's also mostly written in first person, present tense, which I know some people find annoying to read, but I find exhilarating to write.

The structure is pretty traditional, with a quest and a satisfying yet intriguing ending, unlike Xenolith.
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