Thread: Extreme Editing
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Old 05-08-2010, 06:17 PM   #4
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I agree with Tricorp. That's a big chunk to cut out. I'd say put it aside for now and go back to it a few weeks from now and see if it still makes sense and has all the salient facts a reader needs to know about it.

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