Thread: The Peacekeeper series and two other ebooks by Ricky Sides.
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Old 05-07-2010, 09:09 AM   #4
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Re: "The Visitor" - you used "regarded" three times in the opening paragraph. Bold.

Edit - I'm keeping this! There's something apt about having the thread get deleted around me that tickles me.
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