Thread: Hooks, They Ain't That Easy
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Old 05-03-2010, 08:26 AM   #8
J. Dean
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Agreed.

Hooks are a balancing act. Too wordy, and they lose their impact. Too cliche, and it tunes the curious reader out.
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