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Old 04-29-2010, 05:26 PM   #555
Dusty Bottoms
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Originally Posted by beppe View Post


On the window rain
drops
a tear inside
Love it! And it has inspired me to write my own rain poem.


The Fingers of Dead Children

Empty room, lost wish, the requiem whisper
Curtains drawn to keep out the day
The day of the dead
The dead shall have their day



Her eyes, weather report, the unending season
Curtains pulled to let in the night
The night of sorrows
The sorrows bloom always at night



Rain falls, heart beat, the fingers of dead children
Tap
Tap
Tapping against
the
Pain

(Just a little note. I've started writing poetry because I broke two fingers and I can't write prose hunt-and-peck style. It just doesn't flow for me. But I'm really enjoying poetry a lot. Maybe even more than prose )

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