I shudder to think I quiver cogitating with regard to the sort of literary works that would be ratified by "Expert Reviewer #1".
Hum.. a bit pretentious himself, don't you think?
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Match the language to the story, the setting and the characters. Consider your audience.
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This comment could have been his opening, then he could have continued by giving examples using your writing. It would have been much more to the point and more useful to an indie author.
I, also, agree with the comments from "Expert Reviewer #2". I loved your novel, ASparrow, and can't wait for the story to continue.
Thank you for sharing this with us.