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banjobama · 03-22-2010, 01:03 PM

I like the idea but it needs to be tightened up. It sounds a little like a textbook now. You could use symbolism instead of just naming the different ships and planes.

03-22-2010, 01:03 PM	#7
banjobama Busy Read'n Posts: 980 Karma: 5039283 Join Date: Feb 2010 Location: Auburn, WA Device: Pocketbook Touch Lux 5	I like the idea but it needs to be tightened up. It sounds a little like a textbook now. You could use symbolism instead of just naming the different ships and planes.