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Old 03-20-2010, 02:29 AM   #141
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2) I received a detailed critique from: http://the-great-white-ebook-shark.b...a-sparrow.html
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I loved reading that critique... It made so much sense... My interest is due to me studying Professional Proofreading and Editing (mostly to improve my understanding and writing of the English language...

Thanks for posting it.
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