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Old 02-27-2010, 02:23 PM   #4
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Originally Posted by kennyc View Post
You should take a peek Christopher.
I've got to say, it's worth peeking. The novel that I had locked away for years had lots of embarrassing dialogue and over-exposition, but underneath all that fat was a really imaginative story with a nice structure worth resurrecting. It was 185K originally. I've cut it down to 166K and I'll probably cut another 50K.
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