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Old 02-18-2010, 09:41 AM   #125
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Thanks for the puzzling but gratifying surge in downloads. It can't be my silly trailer.

Xenolith is no less free than it was last week, but there is a new review up.

When reading reviews of Xenolith, please keep in mind that some readers are just getting around to reading the version I uploaded in October, which I foolishly released without a thorough, external copy-edit. I tend to be blind to my own typos unless I read backwards.

There is a new punctuation typo in Chapter 1, however. I'd offer a prize to the person who finds any others, if I had a prize to give.

The sequel, Peregrin, meanwhile is chugging along through continuity edits as I caught myself writing several scenes twice! It's shed a few thousand words and accumulated several thousand more to hover at 101k. It's already in better shape copy-edit-wise than the first version of Xenolith.
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