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Old 07-03-2007, 04:16 PM   #6
Cpt. Tim
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sorry it took so long to see this. i'm usually in the sony reader forum.

Sure, i'd love specific critique. This was the first thing i wrote so after years i'm aware myself of things that i should have changed. I.E. avoiding writing in the first person, abrupt ending, maybe a little to risque for the sake of being risque.

But since it is a first attempt i'm less likely to go back over it at the moment. I love the concept and think i have a good outline, and i've gotten a lot of good feedback and positive opinions on the book. I figure i'll hone my writing for some years before revisiting. but of course all feedback, positive and negative is welcome.
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