[alvico]

Originally Posted by mores

Finished it last night.
This book is extremely fun to read. It is well written, polished and never do you feel bored with the story. The characters are likable (well, the good guys are, at least) and you get to know them, which helps to drag you in even further. The changes in perspective were interesting as well and helped build the suspense. I complained about the lack of settings a while back, but in hindsight I must admit I probably exaggerated a bit. Probably finished with a few "in-house" scenes and that kind of stuck in my brain.
I am a bit dissapointed with the end.
It is a good end, I never saw it coming. But it was over so fast. I wish the pool-scene were a bit longer. I thought

Spoiler:

that Grace was mad when she called Kristy's name. Might have been more fun if the reader did get some kind of confirmation that it is indeed Kristy who's come back from the dead, so to speak.

All in all very enjoyable and I would love to read more by you, Vicki!
Of course I will write a review on smashwords!!

Thanks, Mores. Much appreciated.

Your point about the end is most valid, and I’m glad you raised it.

P.S. I don’t know how you did it, but thank you for “hiding” the spoiler.

Edit update: Aha! Just worked out how the "spoiler" tags work.