Finished it last night.
This book is extremely fun to read. It is well written, polished and never do you feel bored with the story. The characters are likable (well, the good guys are, at least) and you get to know them, which helps to drag you in even further. The changes in perspective were interesting as well and helped build the suspense. I complained about the lack of settings a while back, but in hindsight I must admit I probably exaggerated a bit. Probably finished with a few "in-house" scenes and that kind of stuck in my brain.
I am a bit dissapointed with the end.
It is a good end, I never saw it coming. But it was over so fast. I wish the pool-scene were a bit longer. I thought
All in all very enjoyable and I would love to read more by you, Vicki!

Of course I will write a review on smashwords!!