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Originally Posted by happy_terd
hmm...anyone think someone should edit the sentence structure a bit? I dont think a few punctuation fixes would ruin the style of the story.
It got a little rough in a couple places with the ,.:;'s
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I left the punctuation as is. I just changed a few of your paragraph breaks so that they weren't mid-sentence.
This reminds me of
Memorable FIRST SENTENCES - Only Yours, please when Dr. Drib did an excellent job of editing and creating the ebooks in our upload section in lrf and prc formats.