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Old 01-26-2010, 06:23 PM   #5
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Like I said I fixed a few of the obvious spelling errors, but I did not touch the grammar. I wasnt certain if that would be something that people would want done with it.

Also there was a few places where people broke the fourth wall and spoke outside of the story. I believe i removed all of those, but I am sure the story still needs a good proof reading. I was more focused on the huge cut and paste clipboard action required.
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