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Old 01-22-2010, 07:04 PM   #28
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Originally Posted by lene1949 View Post
It's more the fact that Luke is 4 as well as 6 years old in that paragraph...
OMG, Lene, I hadn't even picked up on that! This is why we need editors.

For me, it was more that we were being told that Luke was upset rather than shown.
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