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Old 01-20-2010, 04:19 PM   #24
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Originally Posted by lene1949 View Post
I just had a look at the sample of that book, but something like this:

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ONE day when Luke was about four I remember going around to Ellie’s place to find he was upset. Nick was still on the scene at this stage. The three of them, Ellie, Nick and Luke were in the kitchen. I could tell from the atmosphere there’d been some kind of row. Luke, who was six, had been crying and was getting a cuddle from his mum.
really annoys me, and prevents me from buying the book..
Hmmn. Yes, it's not exactly writing that grabs me either. All tell and no show. Thanks, Lene.
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