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Old 01-12-2010, 07:50 AM   #9
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Good advice from mojoe above.

The thing with dialog (as with everything else in a story) is that it must advance the plot or story or provide insight to the characters etc. It must have a reason for being there and being dialog instead of description or action.

Here are a couple of links:

http://fictionwriting.about.com/od/c...p/dialogue.htm

http://www.sfwriter.com/ow08.htm

http://www.right-writing.com/natural.html

http://www.musik-therapie.at/PederHi...gue&Detail.htm

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