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The girlfriend found a bunch of syntax errors and paragraph anomalies that I am working diligently to repair. If you guys find anything out of the ordinary or things you don't like/don't make sense, please please please message me or post in this thread so I can fix them.
What I've attached to the thread is the absolute rough. It's my MS in its purest form.
Right now I am doing a read through to fix minor quibbles, as is the girlfriend. The next round will hopefully be a line edit.
Sorry for an "incomplete draft"
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