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Old 12-27-2009, 10:16 PM   #82
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Hope you enjoy it.

Any feedback you can offer is most welcome.

One thinking I'm looking to learn, for example, I'm wondering why readers can relate to Frank, but not Seor.
I will keep that in mind when I read it and I'll let you know my thoughts
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